Day 29 Transformed

Day 29 Transformed

Finally, here’s today’s prompt (optional, as always). In “After Turning the Clocks Back,” Jennifer Moxley links present with past, using a few well-placed details to invoke both a sense of the daily “now” and a nostalgic sense of the speaker’s long-ago life.

In your poem today, similarly compare your everyday present life with your past self, using specific details to conjure aspects of your past and present in the reader’s mind.

Transformed

I didn’t know it was fear until trust took its place

between the walls of the home we should rest

in. And who’d have thought that grace could replace

the demands that whipped from me less than my best?

Where roller-coaster rides on rough terrain was my norm

now there is the deepest peace within the fiercest storm;

because light guides my feet close by my Saviour’s side

opening doors that fear used to block, tempting me to hide.

I hadn’t known how dark it was until the lights went on,

hadn’t known how lonely I was before I knew His name;

Accepted, loved, a cherished daughter of God Most High

Having been a mediocre caterpillar, I’m now a beautiful butterfly!

BERJAYA

Day 21: It Dawned On Me.

Day 21

And here’s today’s prompt (optional, as always). In her poem, “Names and Nicknames,” Monika Kumar reminisces over various nicknames she has been given, the actual name her mother gave her, and the way both names and nicknames indicate a claim and an intimacy at once. In your poem for today, we challenge you to write your own poem in which you muse on your name and nicknames you’ve been given.

It dawned on me

All my formative years

I felt cheated by my name.

Others had 2 or more syllables

but mine, only measly

ONE.

Friends could shorten theirs

and create fancy diminutives

but even they had 2 syllables –

Cathy, Abbie, Debbie, not

Dawn!

I never liked the dawn

rarely welcomed it. I

always preferring the evenings

They should have named me

Dusk.

So my nick-names were added on

Dawn-Chorus, Dawn-Raid and

Dawn-Patrol stuck to me.

Old friends call me that, even

now.

And then it dawned on me

(as if I’d not heard that before)

that mornings are glorious

the light before sunrise is

WOW!

I took pride in the meaning

abroad they called me Albe, Aube

and Morgendämmerung (check those syllables!)

but Dorn in German means

Thorn.

And now I love the mornings

and I cherish my glorious name

I see the colours of my calling

and it always means the same

Dawn.

BERJAYA
photo of the dawn in February from my bathroom window – such beauty!!!!

FMF: Without the cross

FMF: Without

I was hoping to combine this week’s prompt word with one of the NaPoWriMo prompts, but it hasn’t happened for me this week. And looking at today’s prompt, I won’t manage it tonight either.

But twice over the Easter weekend, This word – WITHOUT – brought revelation to me.

The first thought was that without the cross on Good Friday, there would be no Resurrection Sunday morning!

And then the Scripture about God reconciling all things to Himself through the cross.1

Also over Easter I joined several conversations about who prefers Christmas or Easter and I heard myself saying the obvious, that without Christmas, there would be no Easter.

But ‘without the cross on Good Friday’ that got me reflecting about how so often it seems that the joy wouldn’t happen without the pain?

You can probably think of many examples yourself, but these came to mind

without the * … there would be no *

pain… gain

Labour… a baby

night…morning

rain… sunshine

planting… harvest

pain… healing

mourning… dancing

grief… peace

sadness… joy

death… life

I’m out of time now, but jot down some more, if they come to mind.

I’m reminded that when we are thankful to God and trust Him IN ALL circumstances, we will always see the hope of the resurrection, after carrying our own crosses.

1 Colossians 1:19-20

BERJAYA

Most Fridays, I join an online Christian writing community, Five Minute Friday. We are given a one-word prompt and write – unscripted, unedited, pure free-write – for 5 minutes. The prompt this week is Without.

I do read through my script afterwards to correct my mistakes; to check scripture references and to find an appropriate image to illustrate the topic.

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