Wanting to write for the Six Sentence Story blog hop is not the same as actually doing it. To make amends to our gracious host Denise, of GirlieOntheEdge, I included the last two prompts that I missed in this response. So, tucked into these six syntactically strained sentences you will find table and option as well as this week’s dust. Some of you might recognize the shop and its proprietor from long ago Sixes. Click HERE to link up.
Another Look by D. Avery
As her eyes adjusted to the dim light inside the What-You-Seek Boutique she saw row after row of small glass jars on endless shelves and it wasn’t until after she wondered out loud if she was in some kind of apothecary that she noticed the old man behind the walnut counter, his bespectacled eyes twinkling as he said no, she wasn’t in an apothecary, that what she was seeing was “a most interesting collection of the ages”.
She picked up one of the jars, noting that it appeared to be empty, but the old man told her to look very closely, that there was, in each and every jar, a bit of dust, that each jar held a sample from a different time and place, and then he suggested she give the jar a good shake and look again.
She gave the man a slight indulgent smile as she shook the jar then set the jar down on a narrow table to peer at it steadily as her smile turned to a look of incredulity.
The jar was now like a snow globe with the scene and characters inside the jar fully animated and ones she was intimately familiar with, for one of the miniature figures was herself, and just as she felt the old anger and resentment begin to return, the scene replayed again, only this time it was as if she was the other person in the scene, seeing from their eyes, feeling their feelings. She shook the jar again and again and always the same episode repeated, always revealing each person’s perspective, not just hers, and when she finally looked away from the jar her wet eyes met those of the old man at the counter who gently asked, “Now can you consider forgiveness as an option?”
Then she was standing outside on the sidewalk underneath the weathered ‘What-You-Seek Boutique’ sign that swung on its rusty chain in the dust laden wind.






