Secret Bubbles

Thank you Rochelle for the Friday–Fictioneers challenge and to Lori for the Photo-Prompt.

More Friday stories HERE.

BERJAYA
PHOTO PROMPT © Lori Wilson

Secret Bubbles

Only five minutes, Anne dashed into the emporium.
I sat in the car, waiting.

Across the street, Sharon was blowing bubbles to attract customers into her toy shop.
I waved, she smiled and puckered her lips suggestively, then blew more bubbles from her fancy pipe.
We are close friends and I snickered at her crude innuendo.

An hour passed. Where is she? At last.

Anne was flushed with a new hairstyle, glowing skin and painted nails.

No clothes?
No time. They have a secret make-up room.

We drove off. I saw Sharon blow a kiss. 

Well, we all need secrets.

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BERJAYA

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28 responses to “Secret Bubbles

  1. a whole hour? He could have consolidated his friendship with Sharon if he’d known

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  2. Gave him extra time to work on his flirtation…

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  3. A patient man indeed but I think his patience will wear thin and Sharon may be in luck!😊

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  4. I am with Ange! he was very patient!

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  5. watching a woman blow bubbles must have taken some of the boredom away while waiting. 🙂

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  6. I like Sharon. 🙂 Nice story.

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  7. I doubt any of the secrets are well kept! I like the scene you created. I can see Sharon and her playful bubble making and the amused character waiting in the car.

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  8. Dear James,

    This left me wanting to know more. By “no clothes” I’m assuming she didn’t buy any new ones. I’d hate to think of her streaking to the car. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Hmm, interesting… and a good one, too.

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  10. P.S. I have just got your short stories in Kindle!

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  11. I won’t tell! Nice one, James.

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  12. As my son would say, “always waiting in a woman”.

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  13. Ooooooo I wonder…
    Plenty of flirting time!
    A patient man though to drive her and then wait.

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  14. A guy’s gotta pass the time somehow.

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  15. Nice work if you can get it, but two can be zero if he slips.

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