Who knew that Termina had clones of Link and Zelda too?
I'm sorry for not updating at all this weekend. ._.;; I got distracted on Saturday by things on YouTube and I went shopping/to an amusement park on Sunday.
Anyway, on to today's report, which is our first one with two Sues. Thanks to
lifeisquicksand, I now have some lovely banners to use~!
Story Title: The return of Ganon (Suethor's captalization, not mine.)
Culprit Author's Name: InuyashaZeldaMegamanFan (Things are starting to look bad already. Really bad.)
Summary: "I fixed it folks so please read it. And like I said last time Ganon returns and kills the sages leaving Link to find six new ones but when a stranger comes to Hyrule carrying four strange masks will Link trust her or will she become his foe. LinkOC pairin"
Number of Chapters: Four. It hasn't been updated in ages, so new chapters are unlikely.
Canon: It's set three years after Ocarina of Time, but it has Link as an adult. The Suethors really love adult!Link, huh?
Sue Rating:
I'm going to give this one a 3. As of right now, both of the Sues just seem to be... There. And are pretty much copies of Link and Zelda, only from Termina. The summary says that one of them will eventually end up with Link, though. I'm guessing it'll be Syrina, the main Sue. (If that's so, then would that mean that Marina would be with Zelda? Yum, hot lesbian sex!)
Full Name (plus titles if any): Syrina; Marina. Since there are six new Sages, more of 'em are expected to appear.
Full Species(es): Carbon copy of Link with boobs; Princess of Termina. (Termina doesn't even have a royal family, not including the Deku and Ikana families.)
Hair Color: "Her hair was pitch black so black even it reminded Link of Ganon's black scaly skin"; Not mentioned.
Eye Color: Neither of their eye colors are mentioned. I'm assuming that Syrina has blue eyes, since she's supposed to look like Link and all.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None mentioned for either.
Special Possessions: A white horse named Dumia, a purple tunic, a sword, a shield, a sack used to hold her weapons, a belt with masks on it, and a flute; None mentioned.
Annoying Origin: Both are from Termina.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Syrina has to help Link defeat both Ganon and Majora; Marina is the one who tells Link that Syrina defeated Majora three weeks after Link defeated Ganon. She also seems to have a connection with Zelda, as she is first found with her at Hyrule Castle.
Annoying Special Abilities: Neither have any so far, although Marina seems to know a lot about Syrina and Majora for some reason. Anyone want to bet she's a stalker?
Other Annoying Traits: They're copies of Link and Zelda, basically. (... SyrinaxMarina, anyone?)
Grammar/Spelling: Run-on sentences can easily be found roaming around this fic, and commas are now an endangered species. There's also many weird spelling mistakes abound, such as "excat". (Wtf, dude?) So, yeah, the grammar and spelling in this fic are meh.
Misc. Notes: The flashbacks in the first chapter are in bold and italics. Now, a few words in bold an italics are okay, but whole paragraphs? It makes one's eyes hurt after a while. Ow. Also, Syrina doesn't appear until the second chapter, and Marina first shows up in the third chapter. The first chapter is still quite sporkable, however, with all of the silly run ons and spelling mistakes and all. Oh, and according to the Suethor, the Happy Mask Salesman's first name is Happy, Naryu is really named Naru and Lon Lon is one word. Did anyone else know this?!
Link seems somewhat OOC in this one, too. I mean, yeah, he is calm most of the time, and doesn't show a lot of emotions, but you'd expect him to feel pretty angry/sad if his friends, the Sages, were all being killed off by Ganon, right? He seems calm about their deaths in the fic. Yes, even about the death of Saria, his friend that he knew for most of his life.
Then again, I could be the only one who thinks this.
Worst of This Story:
As Ganon found his way out of The Sacred Realm, Link was riding through the field of Hyrule when suddenly he saw something running towards him it was a white coloured horse and on it's back was a female rider who had slung over her shoulder a sword and shield. But it looked like a very long run on sentence. Behind her was what appeared to be a huge two legged dinosaur, it kinda reminded Link ofa Dinostofo Barney the Dinosaur only bigger drawing his bow the young hero readied a arrow then calling apon the power of light he realsed a light arrow. He smiled as it hit it's mark but then gasped as the thing multiplied.
'Din, now what!' He thought madly leaping from Epona and drawing his Biggoron sword with two hands after a matter of minutes the dinos were near enough so bringing his sword into one hand and fighting the urge to drop it he powered up a huge energy around his sword then regripping the hilt with both hands he spun realsing a torrent of orange light the light blasted away this horrible run on sentence. Screaming the monsters fell and erupted into flames. (Yum, fried dino! It's a Hylian delicacy!) Sighing he placed his sword back on his back. Suddenly a girl was infront of him. "Boo!" she said. She looked sort of like Link except for a few things one she was wearing a purple coloured tunic and hat, she had a sword attached to her hip not her back like Link did,around he belt she had masks. Her hair was pitch black so black even it reminded Link of Ganon's black scaly skin,also swung over her horses side was a sack which Link guessed held her weapons. But other than that, she looked exactly like Link if he had boobies. Really! Luckly for him he had Zelda to watch over his other items while he was out since all he usually travelled with were his bow and arrows his Mirror Sheild, his Biggoron Sword and his Lens of Truth. (Well, that information was random.) Suddenly the girl spoke.
" Thanks but that was not needed I could have handled that Lizino." She said. Link just shrugged and looked at the girl's horse.
" Nice horse what's her name?" He asked the girl laughed.
" Dumia." She said softly as her horse walked up to her. (Dumia? What kind of name is that? O_o ... Actually, the name Syrina looks made up, too. Eh.)
" Well I have a horse to...uhh hold on." He said pulling his Ocarina from around his neck then playing Epona's song his horse was quickly at his side.
" Epona you have got to remember girl with Ganon gone there is nothing to worry about." He said. (WTF? It looked as if he was talking to Epona, not Syrina. Link seems to have lost the ability to speak properly after meeting the Sue.) The girl gasped as she saw Epona.
" Wow what a beautiful horse...uhhh..." She trailed off.
" Link, my name is Link. What's yours?" He asked. The girl smiled.
" Mine is Syrina." She said. Link smiled abit it was the first true smile he had had since Navi had left. Syrina looked him over.
" Let me guess Kokiri right?" She asked. (Kokiri don't grow up, Sue! Nor can they survive out of the Kokiri Forest and Lost Woods!) 'Whoa' Link thought she could tell of where he came from just by looking at him.
" Well actually I am a Hyilan as you can probably tell I have no fairy." He said. Syrina looked at him closly then laughed realizing that Link was true from what she had learned from riding through the Lost Woods and in the forest of the Kokiri she knew that Link was not in fact a Hyilan. (This Sue must be pretty slow, then.)
" Sorry it was the clothes" She said Link just laughed.
" It's ok the cloths throw everyone for a loop once and a while." He said smiling. Syrina laughed. Suddenly Link fell to his knees as an overwhelming feeling struck him.It felt like his power as the Hero of Time was weakening although he didn't know why. The Sue's OOC-making magic had gotten ahold of him! Reaching for his medallions he pulled out all six and with a look of horror in his eyes he watched as the light medallion lost it's shine. Rauru's power was departing from the young hero.
" This makes no sense. Rauru's power can't depart from the medallion unless..." Link said trailing off. Link looked at Syrina. Link was wondering if the Sue had taken Rauru's powers. Hey, she's a Sue, so she can do things like that, right? he thought.
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" Oh sorry Marina, this is Link the Hero of Time and savouir of Hyrule." She said to the girl then she looked at Link. (Wow, that's a very formal way of telling someone a person's name!)
" Link this is Marina princess of Termina a world pararrel to Hyrule." She said indictating Marina to Link who bowed.
" You highness it is a pleasure." He said. Marina laughed.
" Oh stand up you silly boy formalities are not needed at this point in time your world is in danger more danger than you think." She said. "Someone set us up the bomb! A bomb with a gas that makes you speak like an idiot!" Link looked at Zelda confused what could be worse than Ganon. Zelda sighed.
" Link...Marina here has come to Hyrule with a warning, these are dark times Link not only about Ganon but because a new darkness has come from the same void, his name is Majora and no more then three years ago three weeks after you defeated Ganon he was defeated. (*cue villain theme right around this time*) But his defeat was different not only because Majora is a mask but because you need masks to beat it but that is all ethier of us know." The princess of Hyrule said with a sigh. Link pondered on that bit of information. ("Thinking... Thinking... Chocolate pie is good... Thinking...") Who did he know that delt with masks then it hit him. He looked at Zelda and Marina.
" I have an idea." He said running off towards the market. The two girls looked at each other and followed. After a little run Link Marina and Zelda reached the market town. Link looked over in the corner near the Temple of Time and saw what he was looking for, the Happy mask shop, running to the door with the two princesses following at a slower pace Link walked in. (Link already forgot that Syrina had masks? I'm starting to think that we may have a stupid!Link on our hands.) The man behind the counter smiled at him.
" Why...If it isn't my favourite customer. What can I get for you?" He asked. Link walked up to him.
" Information, Happy, information." He said. Happy looked at him.
" What type of information?" He asked. Link stared at the masks behind Happy looking them over. "Would you like to know why my parents named me Happy?"
" Masks." He said bluntly. Happy smiled.
" Well that I can do Link what type of masks. Goron, Zora, Truth, Gerudo..." He started. Link cut him off.
" Majora." He said looking at Happy. The salesman gasp as he took a step back.
" That mask is evil Link, very evil indeed the only way to destroy it is by using four mask known as transformation mask, those masks are called. The Deku Mask, The Goron Mask, The Zora Mask, The Giant's Mask and The Fierce Diety Mask." (Buwah? The Deku, Goron and Zora Masks weren't used to defeat Majora's Mask. Neither was the Giant's Mask, as you could only use it in the Stone Tower Temple's boss room. The only one of those masks you could use ask Majora's Mask was the Fierce Diety Mask, and it's optional. *big MM nerd*) Happy said walking back up to the counter. Link looked at him with a stern look. He knew that the Happy Mask Salesman was ignoring canon.
" Well where are these masks?" He demanded just as Zelda and Marina walked in.
" I gave them to a young women (Confusing woman with women again?! Man, Suethors fail worse than I thought.), who actually looked just like you only her tunic was different, I think her name was Syrina anyhoo she was the one that defeated Majora." He said. (Sooooooo, Syrina goes around telling people this?) Link gasped. Syrina had defeated Majora. (No shit, Sherlock! "Happy" just said that!)
Anyway, on to today's report, which is our first one with two Sues. Thanks to
lifeisquicksand, I now have some lovely banners to use~!Story Title: The return of Ganon (Suethor's captalization, not mine.)
Summary: "I fixed it folks so please read it. And like I said last time Ganon returns and kills the sages leaving Link to find six new ones but when a stranger comes to Hyrule carrying four strange masks will Link trust her or will she become his foe. LinkOC pairin"
Number of Chapters: Four. It hasn't been updated in ages, so new chapters are unlikely.
Canon: It's set three years after Ocarina of Time, but it has Link as an adult. The Suethors really love adult!Link, huh?
Sue Rating:
I'm going to give this one a 3. As of right now, both of the Sues just seem to be... There. And are pretty much copies of Link and Zelda, only from Termina. The summary says that one of them will eventually end up with Link, though. I'm guessing it'll be Syrina, the main Sue. (If that's so, then would that mean that Marina would be with Zelda? Yum, hot lesbian sex!)
Full Name (plus titles if any): Syrina; Marina. Since there are six new Sages, more of 'em are expected to appear.
Full Species(es): Carbon copy of Link with boobs; Princess of Termina. (Termina doesn't even have a royal family, not including the Deku and Ikana families.)
Hair Color: "Her hair was pitch black so black even it reminded Link of Ganon's black scaly skin"; Not mentioned.
Eye Color: Neither of their eye colors are mentioned. I'm assuming that Syrina has blue eyes, since she's supposed to look like Link and all.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None mentioned for either.
Special Possessions: A white horse named Dumia, a purple tunic, a sword, a shield, a sack used to hold her weapons, a belt with masks on it, and a flute; None mentioned.
Annoying Origin: Both are from Termina.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Syrina has to help Link defeat both Ganon and Majora; Marina is the one who tells Link that Syrina defeated Majora three weeks after Link defeated Ganon. She also seems to have a connection with Zelda, as she is first found with her at Hyrule Castle.
Annoying Special Abilities: Neither have any so far, although Marina seems to know a lot about Syrina and Majora for some reason. Anyone want to bet she's a stalker?
Other Annoying Traits: They're copies of Link and Zelda, basically. (... SyrinaxMarina, anyone?)
Grammar/Spelling: Run-on sentences can easily be found roaming around this fic, and commas are now an endangered species. There's also many weird spelling mistakes abound, such as "excat". (Wtf, dude?) So, yeah, the grammar and spelling in this fic are meh.
Misc. Notes: The flashbacks in the first chapter are in bold and italics. Now, a few words in bold an italics are okay, but whole paragraphs? It makes one's eyes hurt after a while. Ow. Also, Syrina doesn't appear until the second chapter, and Marina first shows up in the third chapter. The first chapter is still quite sporkable, however, with all of the silly run ons and spelling mistakes and all. Oh, and according to the Suethor, the Happy Mask Salesman's first name is Happy, Naryu is really named Naru and Lon Lon is one word. Did anyone else know this?!
Link seems somewhat OOC in this one, too. I mean, yeah, he is calm most of the time, and doesn't show a lot of emotions, but you'd expect him to feel pretty angry/sad if his friends, the Sages, were all being killed off by Ganon, right? He seems calm about their deaths in the fic. Yes, even about the death of Saria, his friend that he knew for most of his life.
Then again, I could be the only one who thinks this.
Worst of This Story:
As Ganon found his way out of The Sacred Realm, Link was riding through the field of Hyrule when suddenly he saw something running towards him it was a white coloured horse and on it's back was a female rider who had slung over her shoulder a sword and shield. But it looked like a very long run on sentence. Behind her was what appeared to be a huge two legged dinosaur, it kinda reminded Link of
'Din, now what!' He thought madly leaping from Epona and drawing his Biggoron sword with two hands after a matter of minutes the dinos were near enough so bringing his sword into one hand and fighting the urge to drop it he powered up a huge energy around his sword then regripping the hilt with both hands he spun realsing a torrent of orange light the light blasted away this horrible run on sentence. Screaming the monsters fell and erupted into flames. (Yum, fried dino! It's a Hylian delicacy!) Sighing he placed his sword back on his back. Suddenly a girl was infront of him. "Boo!" she said. She looked sort of like Link except for a few things one she was wearing a purple coloured tunic and hat, she had a sword attached to her hip not her back like Link did,around he belt she had masks. Her hair was pitch black so black even it reminded Link of Ganon's black scaly skin,also swung over her horses side was a sack which Link guessed held her weapons. But other than that, she looked exactly like Link if he had boobies. Really! Luckly for him he had Zelda to watch over his other items while he was out since all he usually travelled with were his bow and arrows his Mirror Sheild, his Biggoron Sword and his Lens of Truth. (Well, that information was random.) Suddenly the girl spoke.
" Thanks but that was not needed I could have handled that Lizino." She said. Link just shrugged and looked at the girl's horse.
" Nice horse what's her name?" He asked the girl laughed.
" Dumia." She said softly as her horse walked up to her. (Dumia? What kind of name is that? O_o ... Actually, the name Syrina looks made up, too. Eh.)
" Well I have a horse to...uhh hold on." He said pulling his Ocarina from around his neck then playing Epona's song his horse was quickly at his side.
" Epona you have got to remember girl with Ganon gone there is nothing to worry about." He said. (WTF? It looked as if he was talking to Epona, not Syrina. Link seems to have lost the ability to speak properly after meeting the Sue.) The girl gasped as she saw Epona.
" Wow what a beautiful horse...uhhh..." She trailed off.
" Link, my name is Link. What's yours?" He asked. The girl smiled.
" Mine is Syrina." She said. Link smiled abit it was the first true smile he had had since Navi had left. Syrina looked him over.
" Let me guess Kokiri right?" She asked. (Kokiri don't grow up, Sue! Nor can they survive out of the Kokiri Forest and Lost Woods!) 'Whoa' Link thought she could tell of where he came from just by looking at him.
" Well actually I am a Hyilan as you can probably tell I have no fairy." He said. Syrina looked at him closly then laughed realizing that Link was true from what she had learned from riding through the Lost Woods and in the forest of the Kokiri she knew that Link was not in fact a Hyilan. (This Sue must be pretty slow, then.)
" Sorry it was the clothes" She said Link just laughed.
" It's ok the cloths throw everyone for a loop once and a while." He said smiling. Syrina laughed. Suddenly Link fell to his knees as an overwhelming feeling struck him.
" This makes no sense. Rauru's power can't depart from the medallion unless..." Link said trailing off. Link looked at Syrina. Link was wondering if the Sue had taken Rauru's powers. Hey, she's a Sue, so she can do things like that, right? he thought.
" Oh sorry Marina, this is Link the Hero of Time and savouir of Hyrule." She said to the girl then she looked at Link. (Wow, that's a very formal way of telling someone a person's name!)
" Link this is Marina princess of Termina a world pararrel to Hyrule." She said indictating Marina to Link who bowed.
" You highness it is a pleasure." He said. Marina laughed.
" Oh stand up you silly boy formalities are not needed at this point in time your world is in danger more danger than you think." She said. "Someone set us up the bomb! A bomb with a gas that makes you speak like an idiot!" Link looked at Zelda confused what could be worse than Ganon. Zelda sighed.
" Link...Marina here has come to Hyrule with a warning, these are dark times Link not only about Ganon but because a new darkness has come from the same void, his name is Majora and no more then three years ago three weeks after you defeated Ganon he was defeated. (*cue villain theme right around this time*) But his defeat was different not only because Majora is a mask but because you need masks to beat it but that is all ethier of us know." The princess of Hyrule said with a sigh. Link pondered on that bit of information. ("Thinking... Thinking... Chocolate pie is good... Thinking...") Who did he know that delt with masks then it hit him. He looked at Zelda and Marina.
" I have an idea." He said running off towards the market. The two girls looked at each other and followed. After a little run Link Marina and Zelda reached the market town. Link looked over in the corner near the Temple of Time and saw what he was looking for, the Happy mask shop, running to the door with the two princesses following at a slower pace Link walked in. (Link already forgot that Syrina had masks? I'm starting to think that we may have a stupid!Link on our hands.) The man behind the counter smiled at him.
" Why...If it isn't my favourite customer. What can I get for you?" He asked. Link walked up to him.
" Information, Happy, information." He said. Happy looked at him.
" What type of information?" He asked. Link stared at the masks behind Happy looking them over. "Would you like to know why my parents named me Happy?"
" Masks." He said bluntly. Happy smiled.
" Well that I can do Link what type of masks. Goron, Zora, Truth, Gerudo..." He started. Link cut him off.
" Majora." He said looking at Happy. The salesman gasp as he took a step back.
" That mask is evil Link, very evil indeed the only way to destroy it is by using four mask known as transformation mask, those masks are called. The Deku Mask, The Goron Mask, The Zora Mask, The Giant's Mask and The Fierce Diety Mask." (Buwah? The Deku, Goron and Zora Masks weren't used to defeat Majora's Mask. Neither was the Giant's Mask, as you could only use it in the Stone Tower Temple's boss room. The only one of those masks you could use ask Majora's Mask was the Fierce Diety Mask, and it's optional. *big MM nerd*) Happy said walking back up to the counter. Link looked at him with a stern look. He knew that the Happy Mask Salesman was ignoring canon.
" Well where are these masks?" He demanded just as Zelda and Marina walked in.
" I gave them to a young women (Confusing woman with women again?! Man, Suethors fail worse than I thought.), who actually looked just like you only her tunic was different, I think her name was Syrina anyhoo she was the one that defeated Majora." He said. (Sooooooo, Syrina goes around telling people this?) Link gasped. Syrina had defeated Majora. (No shit, Sherlock! "Happy" just said that!)
