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Sunday, September 1, 2024

SMFS Member Guest Post: The Path through the Public Domain Is Twisted but Can Be Fruitful by John T. Aquino

BERJAYA


Please welcome John T. Aquino to the blog today…

 

The Path through the Public Domain Is Twisted but Can Be Fruitful by John T. Aquino


This should not be regarded as legal advice but as a reflection on legal issues.


A writer’s inspiration occurs through various avenues, and one way of dissolving a writer’s block could lie in available works of others.

Not too long ago, I submitted to an anthology a story in which George Bernard Shaw’s character Henry Higgins from the play Pygmalion (1913, later adapted into the musical My Fair Lady) encountered (in a multiverse) the Captain and the Katzenjammer Kids, Mutt and Jeff, and other early 20th Century cartoon characters and helped them solve a murder. I was prepared for the story to be rejected because it was too frivolous or because it merged genres, but, instead, the editor declined it because, he claimed, it violated copyright laws.

I almost understood. Copyright is complicated, and editors are plowing through submissions and perhaps reluctant to worry about legal issues. But all of the characters in my story are in the public domain, having been created in the first two decades of the 20th century. As of January 1, 2024, all works published in the U.S. prior to 1928 can be utilized without permission or fee. (Although not without credit. To claim someone’s else’s work as your own is likely fraud and a crime.) And next year the public domain date will move to 1929 and the year after to 1930 and so on.

I informed the anthology editor about all of this by email, and he never responded. Also, my Henry Higgins story would also have the argument that it was a parody and protected by the First Amendment and allowable under the “fair use” provision of the current copyright law. But that’s a discussion for another time.

Now, it is true that most of the cartoon characters and Henry Higgins (through film and musical adaptations) continued to appear in works published after 1928. But copyright protection for characters starts with their first publication. As the recent Sherlock Holmes litigation made clear, only characteristics of characters that appeared in stories after the public domain cut-off date are still protected by copyright. Any writer utilizing characters that have passed into the public domain should focus only on their original incarnations (and also avoid characteristics from theatrical, film, and television adaptations).

The practice of utilizing public domain characters is not new. There have been Dickens and Austen sequels as well as new Sherlock Holmes stories. David Dean won the 2023 EQMM (Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine) Readers Award with his story Mrs. Hyde, utilizing characters from Robert Louis Stevenson’s The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde.

But the practice can be extended even further because of the great quantity of works that have fallen into the public domain. This is partly because of the 1908 U.S. copyright law that was in force for three-quarters of the 20th century, which required registration, renewal after twenty-eight years, and the inclusion of a copyright notice with a copyright symbol on the work itself. If any of these things were not done, the work fell into the public domain. The 1908 act was replaced by the 1976 copyright act, which doesn’t require registration and initially established a term of the life of the author plus fifty years for works of individual authorship once the work is fixed in a tangible medium.

But, as a result of the 1908 Act, some individual authors, publishers, producers, and movie studios who held the copyright for novels, stories, plays, and films didn’t renew them. This dereliction was especially apparent in films. Production companies rather than studios started making movies in the 1950s and selling them to studios to distribute, and, when these smaller enterprises folded, sometimes nobody renewed the copyright. This happened to the 1963 John Wayne film McClintock after John Wayne died and his production company became less active. Also in 1963, the film Charade immediately went into the public domain because the production company didn’t include the copyright symbol on the print. Similarly, four Charlie Chan movies—Charlie Chan’s Secret (1936), The Scarlet Clue (1945), Charlie Chan in the Trap (1947), and The Chinese Ring (1947)—lacked a valid copyright notice (the first Charlie Chan novel was published in 1925).

In 1998, the Sony Bono Copyright Term Extension Act extended the individual author copyright term from fifty to seventy years and did so retroactively, adding twenty years to active copyrights. The result was that virtually nothing new was added to the public domain from 1998 to 2018, which is why each year starting in 2019 works from the 1920s have been losing their copyright protection year after year.

And so, there are a number of short stories, novels, plays, and films that are in the public domain—either because they are pre-1929 or because the rights owners failed to renew or post a copyright notice on the work. Anything Dashiell Hammett published before 1928 currently is public domain. His The Maltese Falcon will lose its U.S. copyright protection in 2026 and his The Thin Man in 2029. Except for a handful of plays and essays written in his eighties and nineties, George Bernard Shaw’s works have passed into the public domain. The copyrights for a lot of mystery films made by small studios were not renewed, which means that, unless they were based on a story or novel whose copyright is still active, they are no longer protected by the U.S. copyright law.

Writers are known to use works by others for inspiration, tightening and maybe rethinking the plot, changing character names and motivations—in other words, taking them as a starting point and then transforming works into their own. But with public domain works, we can do so with less fear that the owner of the copyright will consider taking action on the argument that we relied too much on their property. If we have thoroughly determined that the work is in the public domain, we could conceivably reinvent the story or, with source acknowledgement, use the characters in new stories—although, unless you feel there is a marketing advantage to use the original names, you might feel safer in changing names and locales.

If you are a film buff, you are likely to notice that television writers have been ransacking ides from public domain film mysteries for years.

There are, of course, caveats. In the case of films, there are a number of issues. One is that, with films, there are different components that could have been copyrighted. An easy example is the case of It’s a Wonderful Life. Its copyright was not renewed, and it fell into the public domain. Public television stations broadcast it for free for twenty years. But then the owners of the original copyright hired smart lawyers who made two determinations: first,  composer Dimitri Temkin’s music for the film had been separately registered for copyright, and they bought the rights from his heirs, meaning that anyone who broadcast the film without permission would violate that copyright; and second, they determined that, based on a then-recent Supreme Court decision involving Hitchcock’s film Rear Window, the copyright for the short story on which the film is based extended to It’s a Wonderful Life as a “derivative work.” With these two copyrights, the owners sent out the message that they would sue anyone who broadcast the film without permission, and the free showings stopped, allowing the owners to license the rights. The film is still in the public domain, but the owners of the original copyright are using the two other copyright assertions to ward off unlicensed showings.

When I was teaching a copyright class for filmmakers, I mentioned the Charade lack of copyright. Afterwards, an ambitious fellow asked me if that allowed him to film a sequel for Charade since it was in the public domain. I said that, while the film is in the public domain, when the screenwriter Peter Stone couldn’t interest anyone in his script, he published it as a novel and only later sold the screenplay. If you use Charade’s characters without permission, I told the man, an argument could be litigated that the copyright for the novel protects the film’s characters, just as it had for It’s a Wonderful Life.

And so, if you are struggling for inspiration and light upon an idea to revisit characters and/or plot of a published work, you basically know that pre-1929 works are in the public domain. If you can’t sleep, consider nighttime reading focused on pre-1929 mysteries of watching DVDs of mysteries from small movie studios. (A bad print of the film is a good indication that the copyright has expired because that means it is a copy of copies of copies.) If you are uncertain whether a post-1928 work is or isn’t in the public domain, you can examine its records through the Library of Congress copyright database. (If you happen to be in D.C., it’s actually easier to do it in person.) Then run your idea by your publisher or lawyer or someone else who is knowledgeable.

It's something to consider. This approach can either spark your imagination to go off on your own or tempt you to use the (hopefully) public domain characters. The latter might be considered pushing the envelope. I can imagine that the editor who rejected my Henry Higgins story fantasized about getting a threatening call from the copyright owners of My Fair Lady. But they would never have owned the copyright in the original character. Talk to someone knowledgeable about your idea and plan before spending the time. But first, dream and dare. 

BERJAYA

 

John T. Aquino ©2024

John T. Aquino is an author, attorney, and retired journalist. He has written over 4,000 published articles and the true crime book The Radio Burglar: Thief Turned Cop Killer in 1920s Queens. His short fiction has appeared in anthologies and periodicals, including Shakespearean WhodunnitsCrimeucopia: Rule Britannia, Britannia Waves the Rules, and Crimeucopia: Through the Past Darkly. 

Sunday, July 28, 2024

SMFS Member Guest Post: The Art of the Short Story by January Bain

BERJAYA


Please welcome fellow SMFS list member and author January Bain to the blog today...


The Art of the Short Story by January Bain

 

Good day to you,

 

By way of introduction, I’m January Bain, a Canadian author obsessed with Story. Short ones, long ones, and all lengths in between, whatever serves the purpose. I have written so many books now, I’ve lost count. But I do have a special fondness for the short story form and have been known to pen a few in my time.

 

What makes the short story form so powerful? How can one hope to compare to someone like Hemmingway with his powerful themes, his renowned use of economy of language and understated intensity. His ability to convey deep emotion and complex human experiences in a few pages can be said to be unparalleled. But no, the same applies to other writers: Virginia Wolfe, Agatha Christie, Alice Monroe, Margaret Atwood, Edgar Allen Poe, William Faulkner, too many to mention in a short blog post.

 

What makes a story memorable, at any length, in my opinion, is the execution of a powerful idea drawing on human emotion, leading the reader through a labyrinth of a journey filled with conflict toward a destination that reveals something of the human experience. And hopefully the wisdom we discover as we read, we can draw on in our own time of need, seeing how others dealt with adversity and triumph. But it’s the powerful idea that first needs to be addressed.

 

Are there any original ideas left? Probably not very many, if any, but that doesn’t mean you can’t use your own unique viewpoint to craft stories. Each person who is compelled to write and is willing to sit down for hours on end, alone, and does so, has something to say, something to offer others.

 

I sometimes ask myself this question: Why do we write, slave over each and every word, paragraph and scene, not happy until we have come close as possible to getting across our ideas to the world? At first light, it can be ego, thinking I can write a story as least as good as the one I’m reading, then later, it’s more focused as we mature, a celebration of all that is human.

 

The hero’s journey speaks to all of us in story form, providing a road map in how to deal with life’s inevitable difficulties. Whether you care most about injustice, truth, expressing love, good versus evil, identity and coming of age, fighting for human rights or the abuses of power and corruption, story can take you on an illuminating journey of discovery and bring you closer to others in the process. It helps one immensely to realize they are not alone in this world, that others have followed similar paths many, many times before. That they have lived to come out the other side, no doubt wiser and better able to cope after being tested, showing all of us how they managed the feat. And if they didn’t survive the journey, it also teaches us something. The short story does this so well. A short, intense glimpse of another world, another time, but always applicable to the present.

 

Of course, it’s assumed that one learns the structure of a short story, scintillating prose, making your characters as real as possible, with a plot and a hook that engages readers, no different than the longer novel form, except in brevity. Celebrated authors have taken all this onboard and more, to arrive at a diamond that others can relate to. A worthwhile enterprise celebrating the art of the short story.

 

I bid you adieu and happy reading.

 

January Bain/Storyteller 

 

BERJAYA

January Bain ©2024 

January Bain firmly believes that stories unite us, that good stories help us to discover the commonality of the human experience by supporting values, empathy and understanding. January writes with her heart, mind, and soul, hoping that her novels will touch your life, giving you moments of freedom as you fly with her to other worlds. January and her husband live in rural Canada on peaceful acreage where a variety of wildlife comes to visit regularly and expects to be fed and paid attention to.

Sunday, April 28, 2024

SMFS Member Guest Post: DOING GOOD AND DOING WELL by Kathleen Marple Kalb (SMFS Vice President)

BERJAYA

Please welcome our Vice President to the blog today…

 

 

DOING GOOD AND DOING WELL


Guest Post by SMFS Vice President Kathleen Marple Kalb

 

 

            Charity anthologies are often good career moves as well as good karma.

            In the last few years, I’ve been fortunate to have stories in several, and every time, there’ve been concrete benefits beyond the pleasure of helping our fellow humans.

            First, if you’re early in your career, giving a story to a charity anthology can be a chance to work with an accomplished editor. To get their comments, and their thinking on your soundtrack for the current story, and every future project, is enough compensation right there.

            Almost all anthologies also give you an opportunity to reach new and different readers. Even if you’re a big seller, it’s unlikely followers of every other writer in the anthology will be familiar with your work. And if you’re still building a readership, it’s a real chance to widen your audience.

            That’s part of any anthology. Sharing the promotional effort is, too. Many of us don’t do as much promotion as we should (looking in the mirror here!) but if you’re out there with a bunch of other folks, suddenly the burden isn’t as heavy. It’s often a lot more fun, too.

            Charity projects, though, are special. The writers, of course, care about the cause enough to give their work and their promotional effort. Often, they’re willing to work harder because the charity is important to them.

            More, though, charity projects carry built-in goodwill that can lead to extra positive attention. Bloggers, reviewers, and others will often promote the project as a way to help the cause. Or just to make sure the writers are rewarded for doing good.

            All of that is good for the anthology and the charity.

            Sometimes, it’s good for you, too, bringing in additional readers for your other projects.

            And sometimes, you just get lucky.

            My most recent charity anthology story, “A Fatal Saint Patrick’s Day,” came out last month in LUCK OF THE IRISH.  The story involves my Irish-Jewish Gilded Age trouser diva Ella Shane, because she was the best fit for the theme. When I signed on, I just wanted to raise some money to help migrant children – and write a good story.

            As it turned out, though, the anthology came out just over a month before my next Ella Shane book, A FATAL RECEPTION, the reboot of the series at Level Best Books – due April 30th. Even better, the editors, Kate Darroch and Jessica Thompson, as well as some of the other writers, have different (and much larger) readerships than I do.

            We told some good stories, we sold a bunch of books, and we brought in a nice donation for kids who really need help. And, as it happens, I introduced Ella to lots of new readers right before the next book.

            The old saw is: “It’s better to be lucky than good,” but maybe it should be: “Look for chances to do good…and you just might be lucky, too!”

 

A FATAL RECEPTION: Gilded Age trouser diva Ella Shane and her Duke are at long last headed for the altar…but they’ll have to handle a murder, a shipwreck, a questionable Polish prince, and any number of other complications on the way. Continuing the highly-praised series featuring an Irish-Jewish Lower East Side orphan who found fame and fortune as a singer of male soprano roles, the latest installment follows Ella and her surprisingly diverse cast of family and friends through mystery and misadventure…and into the greatest challenge of all for an independent-minded woman and her Victorian swain: matrimony!

Buy at Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Fatal-Reception-Ella-Shane-Mystery-ebook/dp/B0CXY8T735

 

BERJAYA

Kathleen Marple Kalb ©2024

Kathleen Marple Kalb describes herself as an Author/Anchor/Mom…not in that order. An award-winning weekend anchor at New York’s 1010 WINS Radio, she writes short stories and novels including A Fatal Reception and the Old Stuff series, both from Level Best Books. As Nikki Knight, she writes the Grace the Hit Mom and Vermont Radio mysteries. Her stories have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Black Cat Weekly, and others, and been short-listed for Derringer and Black Orchid Novella Awards. She’s currently the Vice President of the Short Mystery Fiction Society and a co-VP of the New York/Tri-State Chapter of Sisters in Crime. She, her husband, and son live in a Connecticut house owned by their cat.

Website: https://kathleenmarplekalb.com/

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Saturday, March 2, 2024

SMFS Member Guest Post: Luck of Shadows by Cheryl Phipps

BERJAYA

 

Please welcome our fellow member, Cheryl Phipps, to the blog today. Her short story, Luck of Shadows, appears in the cozy mystery anthology, The Luck of the Irish: Cozy Mystery Anthology, scheduled to be released March 16th. 

 

I’ve been writing short stories for as long as I can remember, with a break when I got married and had my 3 children. Working and raising a family while working, pushed time constraints, but I always had a story to tell at bedtime!

 

In 2001, the founder of RWNZ (Romance Writers of New Zealand) did a talk at my local library and I was hooked on writing more as well as having them published. While I write cozy mysteries alongside contemporary romance and Women’s Fiction novels these days, I still add in novellas or short stories when I can. Not only are they a change of pace and often a challenge, but they can also be repurposed down the track. For instance, I just wrote a cozy mystery for a charity anthology and fully intend in a year or so to make it into a series of novellas. Write what you love, and the length doesn’t matter! (Unless you enter a competition! 😉)

 

About my story:

All my cozy mysteries are classic whodunnits. They are clean, with the emphasis on solving a crime. I love that my heroines care for their small-town communities as well as being somewhat feisty. They never take no for an answer! 

In Luck of Shadows, through compassion and empathy Patience O’Reilly helps people to realize the biggest item on their bucket list while investigating the crime that invariably turns up. 

 

Cheryl Phipps ©2024 

Cheryl Phipps is a USA Today Bestselling author of cozy mysteries and contemporary romance with over 45 works published. Hailing from a small town in beautiful New Zealand, she loves everything bookish and is devoted to her family, friends, and one delightful, if rascally, pooch. Weaving stories that celebrate love, family, and resilience, as well as delivering a heart-racing, happy ending, with a sprinkle of humor–or complex mystery, she couldn’t imagine a different career. She also co-hosts a free popular podcast for self-published authors of all levels called the spagirlspodcast.com.

Saturday, November 18, 2023

SMFS Member Guest Post: OLD STUFF, NEW ANSWER by Kathleen Marple Kalb (SMFS Vice President)

BERJAYA

Please welcome back our Vice President, Kathleen Marple Kalb, to our SMFS blog today…

 

 

OLD STUFF, NEW ANSWER

Guest Post by Kathleen Marple Kalb, SMFS VP

 

          Plot first or characters first?

            It’s a question mystery writers are asked – and ask themselves – just about every day.

            And almost every time, my answer is: characters first. One of my favorite things about writing is creating and living with these interesting people through their adventures. The whole reason I write, and love to read, series mysteries is the pleasure of hanging out with the characters.

            Almost all my story ideas begin that way: what could only happen to my characters, and why are they the only people who could solve the crime? It might be their job, their life experience, or some quirk of their personality, but the story always begins there.

            Or I thought it did.

            Then, last December, while I was making final arrangements for my mother, the funeral director used the phrase “the custodian of the body.” It gave me the idea for a mystery set in a funeral home: an innocent person burying a loved one stumbles into a murder in the next viewing room. Before you condemn me as a hopeless ghoul, please remember that plenty of people use writing as a coping mechanism. I’m one of them.

            The problem was, this great story idea didn’t fit my usual short-story characters, a divorced woman remaking her life at a little Vermont radio station and her colorful pals. Nobody was a good fit for serious grief. The idea simmered in the back of my head for a while, until I stumbled across something related to THE STUFF OF MURDER, my new Old Stuff series.

            The main character is a widow, Christian Shaw, head of the Unity, Connecticut Historical Society. When we meet her in the book, it’s about two years after her husband’s car-crash death, and she’s worked through the initial devastation, building a new life for herself and her son with the help of found family and good friends.

            I’d never used her in a short story because the cast is so large it didn’t seem workable. 

            But if it were just Christian and the person she’d bring with her to make funeral arrangements, her mentor/father figure Garrett?

            Suddenly, the whole thing came together: step back in time to Christian burying her husband and stumbling across a murder in the next room – a murder only she recognizes and can solve because of her unique expertise with old household objects. Give her a little help from Garrett, his former state trooper husband Ed, and some obligingly nasty suspects, and there it was.

            The end result, “The Custodian of the Body,” was my first story in Black Cat Weekly – with the help of an amazing edit by Barb Goffman. (Important aside: anytime you get a chance to be edited by Barb, the answer is yes, thank you – it’s an incredible learning experience, and so valuable to have her on your internal soundtrack as you build a story!)

            And, after writing one short story with Christian, I’ve done several others – so expect to see her again. She – and I – are a little busy right now, though. Christian’s first novel-length adventure, THE STUFF OF MURDER, came out this week from Level Best Books. A fading movie star drops dead on a shoot in her little town, and she ends up using her knowledge of everything from pewter tankards to Colonial bayonets to embroidery to track the killer. If you met Christian in “The Custodian of the Body,” you might enjoy spending a bit more time in her world, and meeting everyone who was hovering just outside the edges of the short story.

            I’m still a characters-first writer, but the experience of writing “The Custodian of the Body” convinced me that when a plot is good enough, you can find characters to fit. One more way to up my writing game.

 

BERJAYA

THE STUFF OF MURDER: When Hollywood comes to small-town Connecticut, it should be the stuff of dreams – but when a fading movie star ends up dead, a whole different kind of stuff hits the fan.  Unity Historical Society head and antique household items – stuff! -- expert Christian Shaw is on set when actor Brett Studebaker falls to his death from the pulpit in an old church. She, the “dads she should have had,” Garrett and Ed, her son Henry, who has a photographic memory and Type-1 Diabetes, and her colorful friends end up helping Assistant State’s Attorney Joe Poli in his investigation. Along for the ride: her giant tuxedo cat, Cookie, Ed and Garrett’s big red mutt Norm, and Joe’s tiny dog Cannoli! Woodworking, embroidery, old poisons, and vintage weapons all figure in the case, which comes together in a wild scene at the Historical Society on Fourth-Grade Field Trip Day.

 

Buy at Amazon: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CKWFXQ3S/

 

Kathleen Marple Kalb © 2023

BERJAYA 

Kathleen Marple Kalb describes herself as an Author/Anchor/Mom…not in that order. An award-winning weekend anchor at New York’s 1010 WINS Radio, she writes short stories and novels including The Stuff of Murder, and the upcoming Ella Shane mystery, A Fatal Reception, both from Level Best Books. As Nikki Knight, she writes the Grace the Hit Mom and Vermont Radio mysteries. Her stories have appeared in Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine, Black Cat Weekly, and others, and been short-listed for Derringer and Black Orchid Novella Awards. She’s currently the Vice President of the Short Mystery Fiction Society and a co-VP of the New York/Tri-State Chapter of Sisters in Crime. She, her husband, and son live in a Connecticut house owned by their cat.

 

Website: https://kathleenmarplekalb.com/

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Sunday, June 11, 2023

SMFS Member Guest Post: An Unexpected Surprise by Karen Keeley

BERJAYA

Please welcome SMFS list member Karen Keeley to the blog today. She has a short story in the upcoming anthology, The Second Black Beacon Book of Mystery. The book is currently scheduled to be released on July 8th. 

 

 

 


AN UNEXPECTED SURPRISE

By Karen Keeley

 

The SECOND BLACK BEACON BOOK OF MYSTERY is coming July 8, 2023. I’m thrilled to be included with my story “Bread Pudding” and to share the TOC with many other wonderful writers, all masters in their own right with their storytelling prowess. 

When I saw that Dave Duncan is a contributor, my jaw dropped. He was a huge influence on me, in my early years of wanting to write. To be included in an anthology with him (all these years later) is like coming face to face with a childhood hero, someone larger than life, a frickin’ rock star!   

Back in the late 80s when I was a heck of a lot younger than I am now, my family and I lived in Calgary (think Canada’s breadbasket on the prairies with a splendid view of the Rockies), busy with day-jobs, school, sports, friends, and life. But I’d always had a hankering to be a writer. Hubby said go for it, so I took a creative writing class as my first introduction into writing fiction. The teacher encouraged us to attend the Writers Guild of Alberta Writers Conference to be held in Calgary that year. Feeling like a complete charlatan, I went with a fellow student. We slunk around in the shadows, totally unsure of what was expected of us. Which of course, was nothing, other than to attend the different author readings and panel discussions. We were, after all, there to learn. And, learn, we did. It was there we met Dave Duncan. 

He was coming off a thirty-year career working in Alberta’s oil patch. Now, unemployed for the first time in his life, he took to writing fiction. In Dave’s words: “My first attempt at a novel came when I was in my fifties: the kids had left home; the house was complete; I had my own business and could sneak time off when I felt like it.” 

He submitted a manuscript to Del Rey in New York, and it was accepted. That was the beginning of a lucrative enterprise. He went on to pen more than sixty science fiction and fantasy novels over a thirty-year writing career. He was a founding and honorary lifetime member of SF Canada, and a member of the Canadian Science Fiction and Fantasy Association (CSFFA) Hall of Fame. Back then, in the 80s, I remember being in awe of him, a soft-spoken gentleman, almost shy—an individual who weighted his words carefully, readily sharing his writing experience with us, answering questions, giving advice, telling us to never give up on our dream. We could do this! 

Over the years, I read many of his books, my favorite being the Great Game trilogy. His world building was epic. His characters relatable. The adventures they found themselves in plausible. His books are still bestsellers today, timeless in their storytelling. I always thought it was just so darn cool that a guy from the prairies had rocketed onto the SF&F literary stage with a bestseller, the forerunner to all that would follow. And like Dave said, if it could happen to him, it could happen to anyone. 

When I heard of his death in 2018, it felt like a part of me died, too—he’d been such a force in my life. A fellow Canadian who had made it big, who stayed true to his storytelling beliefs, such a humble and likeable guy, much sought after at Writers Conferences and book readings. 

From one of Dave’s interviews: “One of the few things that can be taught (as opposed to just learned) about writing is that fiction must be about people. Whether human or not, characters must want, fear, hope, love, etc. in a way that furniture does not.” 

For those of us who have chosen the crime and mystery genre as our platform to tell our stories, we know only too well that conflict is what drives the story forward. We are, after all, people too, and most days we deal with our own wants, fears, hopes, and loves—everything that drives the human condition. 

As part of my ongoing correspondence with Cameron, I shared this story with him. He got back to me, telling me: “I hadn't heard of him (understandable since Cameron is on the other side of the big pond) but looked him up after receiving the submission from his editor and was duly impressed. I'm so glad I'm bringing you and Dave together in this anthology.” Me too, Cameron—me, too! 

Never in a million years would I have thought Dave would write a mystery, but it appears he has. I now look forward to reading Dave’s story (along with all the others) in the SECOND BLACK BEACON BOOK OF MYSTERY. Maybe you too, have had the pleasure (and the wonder) of being included in a publication with someone you greatly admire. If so, there’s no other feeling like it—like standing on top of the world, feeling as though you’ve made it, no longer that shy, awkward wannabe you may have been all those years ago. You too, are a storyteller, and you too, can do great things. 

 

Karen Keeley © 2023

 

BERJAYA

Karen Keeley has published short fiction in more than a dozen anthologies: literary, speculative and crime, the most recent Crime Wave: Women of a Certain Age (Sisters-in-Crime, Canada West) and Tales from the Monoverse (Last Waltz Publishing). She is a member of the Short Fiction Mystery Society (SFMS) and Sisters-in-Crime (Canada West.) Her novella Sticks and Stones was short-listed as a finalist in the 2022 Eyelands Book Awards. A proud Canuck living north of the 49th parallel, she divides her time between family, friends, the outdoors, and writing—not necessarily in that order.

 

Sunday, May 21, 2023

SMFS Member Guest Post: Three Simple Tips For Tightening Your Prose by Andrew Welsh-Huggins

BERJAYA


Please welcome back Andrew Welsh-Huggins back to the blog today….

 

Three Simple Tips For Tightening Your Prose 

by Andrew Welsh-Huggins

 

Tackling a piece of mystery fiction, from short story to novel, can be a daunting task, for novice and veteran writers alike. The good news is there’s never been more help available for the process, whether it’s tips on craft, advice on editing,  suggestions for getting published, the inside scoop on marketing, and more.

 

But this embarrassment of writing riches also comes with a downside: how to keep track of it all. It’s a problem I encountered even while writing my eleventh book, a crime novel titled The End of the Road. Pantsing vs. plotting. Third-person limited vs. third-person omniscient. Show, don’t tell. Some days, trying to juggle all these writing recommendations, you end up feeling like Prince Humperdinck in the film Princess Bride: “I’ve got my country’s 500th anniversary to plan. My wedding to arrange. My wife to murder. And Guilder to frame for it. I’m swamped.”

 

With that kind of pressure, it pays to keep it simple. In that spirit, I offer three easy things you can do beginning today to streamline your prose—and lower your wordcount, at least a bit—with hardly any heavy lifting:

 

_ Reduce attribution. After years of waging this battle with my own writing, I will hazard that at a minimum, half of every use of “he said” or “she said” can be eliminated. Not only are their appearances unneeded, they often bog down dialogue, which should pull a reader forward, not push her back. If the individual tics and tones of speakers are well-established, readers can follow along just fine. Still, if a scene goes on for a while, it’s all right to occasionally provide a reminder of who’s talking and while you’re at it, flavor the text with a description of some sort, a la: “… she said, remembering how long ago breakfast was and wondering when this conversation would end.” But those interjections can usually be the exception, not the rule.

 

_ Stop starting. So many times, we read that a character “…. started walking across the room.” Or “… started to interrupt.” Or “ … started to open the door.” Really? What about just: “John walked across the room.” “Polly interrupted.” “Corrine opened the door.” I’m guilty a hundred times over of this foible, but I’m not alone. It pervades fiction, including that of some of our finest writers. It’s starting to drive me batty.

 

_ Have it with “had.” Tenses can be confusing and make you tense as well. But without question, an easy way to simplify your writing is to stop casting every action in the pluperfect. Take this made-up example: “I remember the first time I’d met Jack. I’d seen him at Donovan’s one Saturday night. He’d walked the length of the bar to offer a woman a fresh martini olive to replace the one she’d just eaten.”

 

Let’s try again.

 

 “I remember the first time I met Jack. I saw him at Donovan’s one Saturday night. He walked the length of the bar to offer a woman a fresh martini olive to replace the one she just ate.”

 

I’m not sure what’s driving the overuse of the pluperfect but I know I’m not alone in wanting—for the most part—to show it the door. Marvin Kaye, the late fiction editor of Sherlock Holmes Mystery Magazine, went so far as to remove unnecessary “had’s” in stories, as he explained on his submission page. “Boiled down, here is what’s wrong with some (not all) compound past tenses—except for fiction written in present tense, our convention is to put things in the simple past.”

 

So there you have it. Deep six “said.” Skip “started.” Halve your “had’s.” You’re already ahead of the game, and have nothing else to worry about other than story arcs, back stories, loglines, synopses, and whether to prologue. Happy writing!

  

Andrew Welsh-Huggins ©2023 

BERJAYA

Writer, reader, veteran pet feeder. Shamus, Derringer and International Thriller Writers award-nominated. Find my work and sign up for my newsletter at https://www.andrewwelshhuggins.com/.

Sunday, May 14, 2023

SMFS Member Guest Post: A Tale of Three Agents by Paul A. Barra

BERJAYA 

Please welcome SMFS list member Paul A. Barra to the blog today with his perspective on an interesting topic…

 

 

A Tale of Three Agents

Paul A. Barra

 

After Mikhail Baryshnikov had been living in this country for a few years in the late eighties, he was asked what he thought was the main difference between the USA and the Soviet Union. The famed dancer replied: "A hard job in Russia is to buy something; a hard job in America is to sell something."

 

I agree with the second half of his contrast, and I don't want anything to do with sales. Leave that up to the experts has always been my motto, so I've been hunting for a literary agent to represent my work ever since I began writing fiction seriously. I need someone else to do the selling.

 

When I sold a novel manuscript to Black Opal Books seven years ago, I asked the editor/publisher to recommend me to a literary agent. Lauri Wellington did that and I signed with a Dallas-based agency, recognizing my inadequacies in the business world of publishing and hoping that having an agent in my corner would assist me in getting my next project in front of acquisition editors of more prestigious houses as I continued to write.

 

After all, agents are known now as the primary screening apparatus for publishers, with many functioning as valued editors in their own right. An agent may represent the adversary in contract negotiations with a publisher, but she is also a tool in the difficult task of acquiring projects for publishers. Not so my first agent.

 

I was assigned to a new agent at the agency, something I expected and accepted. I was a new author. The young agent was, and is, an excellent communicator, muti-talented as a cover artist and marketer, and now a publisher of her own marque. At the time, however, she was new and disliked the sales aspect of agenting almost as much as I did. She was also badly treated and mentored by the senior agent at her firm. Not only did she not sell my next script, she never read it. Her boss told me to wait in the queue like everyone else seeking representation, even though she had already signed me and was receiving her cut of my royalties from the first book (meager as they were). My relationship with the agency ended badly—luckily for me, as it turned out, since that agency is now charging reading fees—and my young agent left the fold. 

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I published another book with BOB and then lucked out with "Westfarrow Island," signing with my independent publisher of choice, The Permanent Press. The product was beautifully done and got a dynamite review in Publishers Weekly when it dropped in 2019. A year later I sent them my next work, a mystery at a horse racing venue. The protagonist was a fallen priest. Co-publisher Marty Shepard called me to say he didn't like priests, in fact he "couldn't stomach the idea of a man dressed in black;" would I turn the man into a former priest? Since a main theme of the novel was redemption, I told Marty that wouldn't work if the man had already abandoned his vocation. We agreed to disagree, and I was out one publisher.

 

So I went hunting another literary agent. I found one in New York who liked the Westfarrow sequel I had written. I recognized the name of her agency even if I didn't know her by reputation, but she was smart and easy to get along with. It was the time of Covid, so she had emigrated back to her home in the Bay Area, but our work together was not affected. We talked about changing the characters, possibly even using a pen name, but the agent eventually decided to put the revised script out on submission as a sequel called "Sheepshead Bay Commission." Predictably (I can say that now but wasn't nearly so certain then), no one would touch it. One editor from a major house told my agent that he would get fired if he ever took on a sequel of a novel owned by another publisher. Bad blunder, but we could recover.

 

The trouble was, my agent had lost heart. She gradually got slower and slower answering my emails, didn't have anything definitive to say about my second major rewrite of Sheepshead Bay, wasn't enthusiastic about the other works I had written. By now it was 2021 and I had not published anything but few short stories in two years. She became my literary agent in name only.

 

Another New York agent, this one an academic with a terminal degree in Black Studies from a prestigious university, liked a children's historical adventure I wrote called "Samson and the Charleston Spy." My second agent was gracious in releasing me from our contract, and I was off with Agent #3. This was in early 2022.

 

I learned a lot about middle grade readers. How, for instance, one could not write in first person if another, third person, POV was going to have a say later in the book. We can do that sort of thing in adult novels, but ten-year-olds can get confused with the change. Since the novel takes place in and around the bombardment of Ft. Sumter and is told from a Southern perspective, and contains the themes of slavery, nativism and zealotry for the Cause, my new agent and I worked hard getting the script in shape. She even sent it to a "sensitivity reader" for input. When it was finally ready, she submitted it to eight editors at NYC publishers. Result: eight rejections.

 

Three wanted only contemporary novels, no historicals; three offered no comments as to why they passed on the novel. Agent #2 had an excuse for every rejection but one: One editor had the effrontery to suggest to my agent, on the phone, that the script would be more palatable to NYC editors if the protagonist himself turned out to be the spy. A native South Carolinian son of the Confederacy becomes a Yankee spy! If I had agreed to that, I would have had to move out of the South. Under cover of darkness. The children's book world is a fearsome jungle indeed.

 

Agent #3 wanted to wait before she tried submitting Samson again, and she wasn't interested in the adult manuscripts that were beginning to pile up on my desktop. The same thing happened as happened with Agent #2: she gave up after one round of submissions. Late last year, she called to tell me she was leaving her agency for another and would not be taking me with her. She was as kind and gracious as always. I think of her—and Agent #2— as a friend, although I cannot imagine a situation in which I would ask for her advice again.

 

Meanwhile, a story of mine had been selected for a Mystery Writers of America anthology ("When a Stranger Comes To Town"). The MWA was represented by Alec Shane of Writers House. Although my only contact with him was when he sent me my share of the book's advance ($549) and author copies of the hard and soft-covered products, I wrote to him suggesting that since he already represented some of my work, he might as well represent all of it. He did not agree, so I am again unrepresented.

 

My writing buddy is suggesting that I go self-publishing this time. Writers are making money by doing the publishing houses' work themselves—and there are many artists and editors and producers who can assist, for a fee. I'm not taking him seriously because the very thought of the time and effort necessary to be successful, truly successful, as a self-published author drains away all my energy. I don't think I'm strong enough to put in the work that writing requires, plus the work into marketing and promoting my book that would be necessary to make money. That's sales, and sales is not the work of a writer.

 

A writer ought to be able to support his family by writing alone. I did it for many years as a freelancer, writing feature stories in a niche press market and in magazines. Fiction shouldn't be impossible. So, I'm starting over again. I'm going to query small presses and work my way up, gradually. And, if I ever do attract an agent again, I'm going to talk to her about her thoughts on trying out more than one submission blitz before giving up on a project. I understand sales is difficult, I will tell her, but that's why I want you to represent me. I do the writing; you do the selling. Can that still work in 2023?

 

Paul Barra ©2023 

BERJAYA

Paul A. Barra's latest novel, Full of Eyes: A Rebel Bishop Mystery, is a historical mystery.